Oh Look!

Goldfinch60



Oh look!

Another Christmas present.

It’s a little late

But still much appreciated,

It’s from my granddaughter.

It is a picture,

A picture that shows

She knows me so very well.

It shows my daily schedule

The one that is now my life,

My life that has changed

Now my lover has passed on.

But this new chapter is getting better

As my day can be filled

With the life

My granddaughter sees,

Sees for me.

Eight in the morning – coffee.

Nine in the morning,

‘til five in the afternoon – croquet.

Six in the evening – Happy hour.

What better way could I have

In spending my day.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 20th, 2021 02:22
  • Comment from author about the poem: Received this poster from my granddaughter as an extra Christmas present
  • Category: Humor
  • Views: 36
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Comments6

  • Goldfinch60

    Oops. picture at 90 degrees

  • dusk arising

    May the weather be optimum for your activities sir.

    (Where's the 'now write a poem' section?).

    • Goldfinch60

      Unfortunately we are not allowed to play croquet at the moment.

      The 'write a poem' can be found within any of the other sections.

      Andy

    • orchidee

      Good write Gold.

    • Doggerel Dave

      In England now , it's no longer 'Jolly hockey sticks!', it's now 'Great croquet mallets!', is it? I'd never have guessed.

      Dave

      • Goldfinch60

        Strangely Dave I used to play hockey in my younger days but now this old codger cannot run any more so a gentle stroll around the croquet lawn is fine.

        Andy

      • John Prophet

        Nice life Andy.πŸ‘πŸΌπŸ₯³

        • Goldfinch60

          Tank you John it certainly is.

          Andy

        • L. B. Mek

          Time: as kind, as it is brutal
          the small hand 'ticks', churning
          those 'what if' regrets
          to foster a bitterness towards old age,
          the big hand, 'gongs'
          and shudders heart's
          with timely interventions
          like a simple present, gift wrapped
          with that 'skippity' glint
          of youth's revitalising fingers
          delivered by your grandchild's
          adoring eyes...
          thanks for inspiring my little reply Andy,
          a warming antidote read to this grey Winter days you've shared,
          though I must say your schedule seems jampacked, don't forget to stop for lunch my friend,

          • Goldfinch60

            Thank you Mek, time is kind to me. When my children and grandchildren ask me what I want for birthdays etc my answer is always "Your time."

            Andy



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