Even though she could not swim
She dived into the wreckage
To retrieve the bottle
The bottle with the message inside
The message read ...
Dont be a watered down version of yourself !
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Julie B (
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Nor lose yourself in the chains of immature love. A caged tiger is no longer the majestic wild beast but a confused and humiliated stripey thing.
Great writing Julie!
Very good words Julie.
Andy
Thankyou Andy
Good write Julie.
watered down or not, acknowledging the journey is what I find: key,
we human's are malleable members of existence, sculpted by our jagged paths and sharp - tumultuous turns of life,
when we can accept that fact
and realise, we are allowed
'to be:
who we need or want
wherever and when
we let ourselves
just be...'
maybe then, we'll take a second to look around
see that landscape view of life,
instead of zooming-in
on our reflections
in other's eyes...
thanks for inspiring my little reply,
some insightful thoughts you've shared, a good read
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