Indivisible Fractions
Now .. is that ever shifting point in time
when past and future subdivide
Indivisible and abstract, yet only a moment away
- Author: Neville ( Offline)
- Published: January 22nd, 2021 05:00
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 95
Indivisible Fractions
Now .. is that ever shifting point in time
when past and future subdivide
Indivisible and abstract, yet only a moment away
Comments10
Would that be 'This moment in time', or 'That moment in time', or 'That moment just gone' or 'That moment not here yet'?
I'm reduced to a jibbering wreck. Partly due to this poem. Partly due to that gal I did meet! heehee.
.............. Yes probably ........... and thanks for taking the time to consider ... hello đŸ™‚
I am writing this looking to the future but just realise i started in the past. So how can i catch up with myself. I'm unsure whether my opening gambit there has a doppler effect built in backwards or it's red shift turned blue?
Captains yule log, stardate twenny too,one,twenny one. I am warped and suffering photon torpedo anal discomfature.
Needless to say you thoroughly confused me on a day when i was hoping to watch faeries dance.
................. How do ya think I feel ... Thanks DA n no kiddin ........
of those illusive intangibles
you pen...
of past 'what if's'
my mind
begrudgingly: attends...
a smart format for delivery
you've chosen, ever subtle
even when versed so accessible
............ Bless you LB ... I'm on a lockdown countdown except for being on call for local psychiatric emergencies ............ take care my friend .. N
Hark the future
The present’s so fast
By the time you say it
It’s in the past
Well done Neville
................... it would seem you got it maybe .............. bless ya Jerry & in no time at all, consider yourself well n truly thanked ...
Beguiling as ever these transient fractions of time - - - wonder where this moment went as I was typing with intent to find answers to mystify thee...... great read Nev and well received by many in front and behind my indecipherable words.......... x
................................. thank you my dear friend .. as always, so very much appreciated ........ x
Is this to be my Destiny, my one true way, Master?
Have you bestowed upon me the key which grants escape from these polarities and the attainment of enlightenment?
Blessings to thee, O Lord………
... I would be very careful what you allow to be put in your rose hip syrup from now on ...
Each moment in our time is so important, enjoy each one because s soon as they arrive they go.
Andy
......... spot on ... as always .............. have a golden weekend GF60 ......... N
Ooh 64 views - the last time I looked at this poem anyway! 63 of them from me, trying to work out those 'moments'! heehee.
I make it 68 as of write now ... but thanks for popping back so many times Orchidee .. they all count ya know ...............
As my thoughts are forming, the future blends into present, and now it's all in the past, and all it took was indivisible fractions of time.
Indubitably so!!!!!!
..................................... my thanks to you regarding this matter will last indefinitely ............
Oh the mind is a fragile instrument
The here and now is what matters
The past made us, we must not lament
leave the past in its tatters
Let go of the monsters that the eyes invent
Thanking you kindly RB .. another perfect poem in the making methinks ........................... Neville
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