I’m alone laying here in my bed
Darkness surrounding me
The silence is deafening
The memories of you
Flashes through my mind
I want to smile but I can’t
It hurts to remember
It hurts to forget
One minute you were here
The next you were gone
And I haven’t been the same since
You weren’t happy were you
And I should have noticed
Why didn’t I notice
You made up your mind
You followed through
I wish you didn’t
I wish you were still here
I should have been there
But I lost you and now I know
What being unhappy truly feels like
I miss you but I’ll see you again someday
I love you always until we meet again
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Author:
Eros M. Beret (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: It’s about loss in its many forms whether it be a friendship, relationship, or losing a loved one it hurts and all you can think about is seeing them one last time.
- Category: Sad
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Comments4
Such feelings of loss begin to teach us to be more sensitive to the needs and wellbeing of those within our circle.
That loss is so emotive but you will meet again and all will be well - see my poem today about a similar subject.
Andy
I get that - You have very well encapsulated the feelings of loss and regrets at missed moments.
For myself I cannot believe the idea expressed in your last two lines, which makes it all the more important to value those we know and love while we can.
Regards Dave
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