Your eyes are going hollow,
As my heart sits full of sorrow,
It will all be better tomorrow,
We wont have to borrow,
Dont worry for I will always follow.
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Author:
arabella2001 (
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- Published: January 25th, 2021 07:33
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 29
Comments5
This is very good. So much can be read into your lines here. I am a big fan of short punchy poetry.
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Thank you, means alot. It's really nice to know theres a place to come and write. I will definitely have a look at some of your work.
I like this alot.
Welcome to MPS. Short and to the point arabella. Well done!
Very good words Arabella.
Welcome to MPS.
empathy
is humanity's true super power, as your beautiful words so rhythmically: demonstrate,
a great read, thanks for sharing
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