Stunningly Clear Vistas

FredPeyer

today my mind behaves like

slow moving molasses

a viscous sweet brown mass

spreading indistinctly

through my body

sticking like cookie dough

to my imagination

 

today my soul flutters

like a drunk butterfly

in desperate search of beauty

getting lost in the colors

of a teardrop rainbow

emerging powerfully pristine

in a brilliant burst of light

 

today I am carried

on silver bat’s wings

from dark arrant despair

to breathtaking heights

illuminating my heart

stunningly clear vistas

of the untrodden path ahead

  • Author: Alfred Peyer (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 25th, 2021 20:16
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 51
  • Users favorite of this poem: Fay Slimm.
Get a free collection of Classic Poetry ↓

Receive the ebook in seconds 50 poems from 50 different authors


Comments +

Comments6

  • Doggerel Dave

    Hallucinatory Fred?

    Dave

    • FredPeyer

      Thanks Dave, aren't we all? How else could we come up with all this 'stuff'?

      • Doggerel Dave

        Perhaps you could be right, Fred - after all I've been advised by another poet with much more seniority here to 'be very careful what you allow to be put in your rosehip syrup' - I'm half tempted to do an Oliver Twist and ask for more...

      • Goldfinch60

        That untrodden path ahead is full of wonder, keep walking it.

        Andy

        • FredPeyer

          Thanks Andy, yes it is, and I guess we don't have much choice but to keep on going.

        • orchidee

          I'm gonna climb a tree, then I will see all that you're seeing too, from that view up there. lol.

          • FredPeyer

            Thanks orchie, and once you are on top I know you will start to sing and scare away all the birds!

          • Fay Slimm.

            This superb piece of poetry has to be one of your best Fred and it goes straight into my list of faves - - great read.

            • FredPeyer

              Thank you so much Fay, you are much much too kind! Actually made me blush a bit. Or maybe that is just my sunburn?

            • L. B. Mek

              wonderfully vivid, a fantastical journey within words...
              really well executed, a great write!

              • FredPeyer

                Mahalo L.B., you too are very kind with your awesome comment. I do appreciate it.

              • Philip

                Your day sounds like it starts like mine. I love the way the feeling of your poem turns from molasses to breath taking heights.
                Phil

                • FredPeyer

                  Mahalo Philip, isn't it amazing how fast our outlook on life can change sometimes.



                To be able to comment and rate this poem, you must be registered. Register here or if you are already registered, login here.