I sat in my car
Country singers singing about bars
Lost in my mind
With nothing to find
I thought it would be fine
I thought he would always be mine
He sat at home
In a scary silence
Letting his thoughts freely roam
Creating in his head a new violence
He thought he’d say “I do”
He thought he had a clue
I can’t help but wander
Why I am so somber
We still have time
Wasting it would be a crime
He can’t help but wander
Why he is so somber
We still have time
Wasting it would be a crime
We might be 700 miles apart
But we can still be together at heart
Love can win
But I wish hope didn’t feel like a sin
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Justagirl (
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- Comment from author about the poem: My boyfriend and I are going away for college and will be over 700 miles apart, and his family is moving out of town so even when we are home we won’t be together. We have been dating a long time and it just feels like a major event, and we are trying to decide if we should try and stay together or not.
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Comments3
Very well written, great presentation. Distance relationships are difficult, but sometimes they do work. Look at it this way: If after college you two are still an item, it will last a lifetime. I know, I am married nearly 45 years! Good Luck!!!
Love can always win even at a distance.
Andy
when it comes to love - true love, there is no room for judgement, because it transcends our capacity to comprehend, just choose to trust:
yourself,
your 'chosen' partner,
and whatever fate equates of your effort's,
only thing you can insure
is that there is no room for regret, give it all you've got
and 'hope' that's enough, if not...
allow yourself time to accept
taking baby steps, 'brush yourself-off, and begin again,'
making the best of every opportunity you're gifted!
ikr so damn easy to type how-to manuals, that read so insensitively, generic...
(forgive my little impromptu sermon, I couldn't resist
thanks for inspiring me)
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