She said if you fall down, don't be sad
Maybe you'll see more in your hand
In a world of beauty we can forget
Focusing on pain or full of regret
Yet inside us all is a spirit of play
That is thankful to nature everyday
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Poetic Dan (
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Good write and clip Dan.
Thank you buddy, have a wonderful day!
Enjoyed your poem, Dan - also your comments (I was very taken with them) could be turned into a small useful poem, I reckon. Just a simple request...
Yes it definitely will be my next one... its funny I never filled in that part (author notes) to begin with and then I was always taken by people reflecting on that and not the writing.
Now days I just do as I please and it is what it is and then the magic happens and to me that's what poetry is...
All looking for no answer in a bucket of ideas..
Oops there it goes again lol
Always appreciate your time good sir! Have a fantastic day..
Very nice words Dan.
Always appreciated good sir
Nature is so important in our lives, even if we fall the glory of nature can be seen to be closer.
Andy
Yep, that was definitely what she said...
Always appreciated my friend
I'm shivering just watching, lol
a good read my friend
Tis cold over these parts, even snow today!
Always appreciated my friend
Nature is lovely . I might be having a sad day and a little bird might make me smile ... even if just a little .
Nice poem 🙂
Bless you and perfectly said. Nature is always talking of we know how to listen
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