Looking for no answer in a pot of ideas
With the same outlook that got me here
Life is for the emotional rush of tears
To help wash away any inner fear
Nothing is lost when the illusion is clear
Minds do matter if the heart can hear
Between the beats and the silence
We all become aware of guidance
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Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Well I was not ready for where that went, I was only going to do a couple of lines to go with the picture....story of my life lol all of nothing and something in between, we should all get carried away! Life is but a dream, thanks for all being in mine!
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First class reflections on life where minds matter if hearts hear -- I love the fun-faced family picture - and the inspirational rhyming too - thanks Dan for sharing it with us.
Yep, it was only ment to be that but I must truly be in a place of lasting when most thoughts come like this..
Always a pleasure and thankful for your time!
'Between the beats and the silence
We all become aware of guidance'
sublime demonstration of insightful poetry my friend, what a talent you've been gifted, keep that faith - in yourself, refreshed:
'may that pen
never cease
while your pulsed beat, drums
proud - to the melody
of your life's symphony...
a great write!
Ha, always such a pleasure to get your reflection to truly see i made a connection...
Superbly replied as always my friend, let it flow
conversation between two old pals
'What happened to your blues mate'
..... 'I became a poet and wrote them out of my life'
Your inner god gave you the guidance, it's served you well.
I properly laughed out loud with that comment as the back and forth over the years had truly given me trust in your wisdom of just being true to yourself!
I actually thought of a line this morning that did this is not a new leaf is just who I was ment to be...
Think I'll carry it on...
Only blues I see now if in the sky
Good write Dan. That's me short and sweet comment!
Yet a flag post in always happy to see. As I'm forever grateful for your company.
Gorgeous picture, and I am not talking about you Dan! But I guess you make up for that face with that beautiful poem of yours!
Ha ha, you know it my friend, beautys and the beast but I'm happy to be me....
Always appreciate your time
God words Dan, that guidance is leading you to some wonderful places.
Andy
Anywhere i wish my friend
Excellent Dan that's what happens when you open one door... Just like life Great thoughts today Bravo
I feel that door is no more my good friend and I'm just letting it all go now..
Thank you for your time
Always appreciated
I heard life was a play and the one we call God plays all the parts.. Why not? Make it up as you go along.. isn't that what life is? We are forever improvising aren't we?
Absolutely we are and your shining like a god in my stage of light!
Thank you for giving me your precious time
Always a pleasure to read
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