The Green Disappears – Haiku.

Goldfinch60



The white flakes sail down,

Lay so gently on the ground,

The green disappears.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 9th, 2021 01:58
  • Comment from author about the poem: It's snowing!!
  • Category: Haiku
  • Views: 28
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Comments9

  • orchidee

    Good write Gold.
    We got a slight covering, but the green has not completely disappeared.

  • Goldfinch60

    Thanks Orchi.

  • Andrew Charles Forrest

    Autumn pulls a silky blanket over its head and sleeps again
    Great capture of nature today Andy

    • Goldfinch60

      Thank you Andrew.

      Andy

    • Doggerel Dave

      Not fond of haikus generally, Andy - but this one gave me a clear vision. So...

      • Goldfinch60

        Glad I could clear your vision Dave, thank you.

        Andy

      • willow tree

        Lovely gentle soft haiku

        • Goldfinch60

          Most kind willow, much appreciated.

          Andy

        • L. B. Mek

          beautiful Andy,
          it snowed here as well, not as much I think - for our
          'grey, pointedly: stayed...'

          • Goldfinch60

            Thank you Mek.

            Andy

          • dusk arising

            Tears from heaven fall
            Bringing forth a joyous call
            Build a snowman tall


            Grrr at you getting me counting syllables!

            • Goldfinch60

              Well at least you only have to count up to seven so it is not too hard.

              Andy

            • Jerry Reynolds

              Well done Gold accept this humble
              response.

              dandelions bloom
              in the snow

              • Goldfinch60

                Thank you Jerry.

                So do daffodils, at least they are in my garden.

                Andy

              • AlitaOpal

                Green is the colour of the heart chakra, wonderful piece Goldfinch 🌹

                • Goldfinch60

                  Thank you Alita, much appreciated.

                  Andy



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