The white flakes sail down,
Lay so gently on the ground,
The green disappears.
- Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: February 9th, 2021 01:58
- Comment from author about the poem: It's snowing!!
- Category: Haiku
- Views: 28
The white flakes sail down,
Lay so gently on the ground,
The green disappears.
Comments9
Good write Gold.
We got a slight covering, but the green has not completely disappeared.
Thanks Orchi.
Autumn pulls a silky blanket over its head and sleeps again
Great capture of nature today Andy
Thank you Andrew.
Andy
Not fond of haikus generally, Andy - but this one gave me a clear vision. So...
Glad I could clear your vision Dave, thank you.
Andy
Lovely gentle soft haiku
Most kind willow, much appreciated.
Andy
beautiful Andy,
it snowed here as well, not as much I think - for our
'grey, pointedly: stayed...'
Thank you Mek.
Andy
Tears from heaven fall
Bringing forth a joyous call
Build a snowman tall
Grrr at you getting me counting syllables!
Well at least you only have to count up to seven so it is not too hard.
Andy
Well done Gold accept this humble
response.
dandelions bloom
in the snow
Thank you Jerry.
So do daffodils, at least they are in my garden.
Andy
Green is the colour of the heart chakra, wonderful piece Goldfinch 🌹
Thank you Alita, much appreciated.
Andy
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