nicolibellamont

Silent Prayer

Ill find a way to disappear
It's in my mind, they say
A half empty labyrinth
Of hear's and there's
Where I could get lost
While In the darkness I grow
Suffocating my silent prayer

  • Author: nicolibellamont (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 11th, 2021 08:57
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  • willow tree

    Interesting ! What’s grows in you ?

    • nicolibellamont

      Its that black hole that lives inside of me, slowly eating away at who I am. Sometimes I feel as though I am suffocating.

      • willow tree

        Sounds uncomfortable . May you be filled with ease

      • FredPeyer

        Well penned, nicoli. I think there are times in everybody's life where we feel that big black hole inside. But contrary to the real black holes, ours can turn into a sun again.

        • nicolibellamont

          Still working on that one. Thanks for the encouragement

        • Goldfinch60

          In that labyrinth there is always a way out into freedom, it may well be around the next corner in your life.

          Andy

        • 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽

          Awesome wording and rhythm in this muse in brevity, so poetic to get lost in labyrinths of the mind. The last line woah fabulous!! Kudos!!

          Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.



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