Ill find a way to disappear
It's in my mind, they say
A half empty labyrinth
Of hear's and there's
Where I could get lost
While In the darkness I grow
Suffocating my silent prayer
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Interesting ! What’s grows in you ?
Its that black hole that lives inside of me, slowly eating away at who I am. Sometimes I feel as though I am suffocating.
Sounds uncomfortable . May you be filled with ease
Well penned, nicoli. I think there are times in everybody's life where we feel that big black hole inside. But contrary to the real black holes, ours can turn into a sun again.
Still working on that one. Thanks for the encouragement
In that labyrinth there is always a way out into freedom, it may well be around the next corner in your life.
Andy
Awesome wording and rhythm in this muse in brevity, so poetic to get lost in labyrinths of the mind. The last line woah fabulous!! Kudos!!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
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