I banned the word ‘loneliness’ from my
vocabulary and replaced it with ‘solitude’
solitude is so much better, much more bearable
self-imposed, intentional, pleasing, satisfying solitude
where I am not lonely but with my own self
where I have intense discussions with my ego
where I can evaluate my problems and faults
where I can be wrong, even obstinate
without repercussions or reprisals
wonderful, beautiful solitude
my voluntary retreat from mortality
protects me from the outside world
shields me from life’s noise and troubles
allows me to gaze out from my bubble
into the chaos, bedlam, and disarray
of the world outside
in my solitude I can create my own
universe, my own alternate reality
where I will never be lonely again
where I will be free from restraints
where my driving force will be spiritual
where love of self opens up my eyes and mind
where I can truly be who I was meant to be
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Author:
Alfred Peyer (Pseudonym) (
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A nice rhythmic essay of a poetic perspective. Many people might say they "...hate the idea of loneliness..." and compound negatives.
Thank you RDS, being alone can be a good thing!
Got it. I'm there too - somewhere like that. Neatly done - thanks.
Thanks Dave, I guess we both know how it feels and how to make the best of it.
Seems to be an age thing, but I see it more now than in younger days. The need to leave the chaos out of my sphere. Very good write...
Thanks John, yes I think you are right. It seems to have something to do with age.
Very true words Fred, so much can be seen and accomplished in solitude.
Andy
Thanks Andy,
yes it is nice sometimes to shut oneself off from outside influences and listen to the inner self.
Good write Fred.
You forgot a line? Here it is:
'Where I can escape Orchi's singing forever'. heehee.
Thanks orchie, since I am tone-death your singing doesn't bother me at all!
solitude is a useful tool
indeed, often a gateway to wisdom's intent..
though, it should never be idealised above that truth: where we spend our lives searching for that rare
true friend
to share ourselves - unfiltered, with..
a reassuringly warm and empowering read, dear Poet
Thanks so much L.B.
Your insightful comment is really appreciated.
Woww awesome idea!! Solitude sounds far more poetic, independent and great than loneliness indeed. Your entire poem conveys that fabulously. Kudos!!!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
Mahalo for your kind comment. Will do!
It is a remarkable strength - to enjoy our own company 🙂
Thanks G M, if you cannot enjoy your own company I guess you are sh.. out of luck!
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