the sun tomorrow

dusk arising

 

 

and tomorrow
the sun may shine
and we shall share
tales of warmth

though beneath
the stars this night
remains the haunted shell
of yesterdays
truth departed

where once
moonlight
bathed your eyes
in radiant amour

  • Author: dusk arising (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 20th, 2021 00:35
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  • Goldfinch60

    Tomorrow the sun WILL shine on all our lives.

    Andy

    • dusk arising

      So true,that's it's job after all.

    • orchidee

      A fine write dusk. A bit of amour?! Oohh!

      • dusk arising

        An bit of amour helps the world go round.

        • orchidee

          Aww, Fido won't let me have too much amour. I'll put him out the back yard. He's a pest sometimes! lol.

        • Jerry Reynolds

          Dusk, that is really good.

        • FredPeyer

          beautifully written, d a. Love the lines 'Of yesterdays truth departed'!

          • dusk arising

            Yep, you don't get to our years without learning how life brings change. Thanks Fred. Good to see you writing regularly again.

          • jarcher54

            Here in Texas we have forgotten tales of warmth. I deeply enjoyed this compact little rumination. You invoke so much with so few apt words.

            • dusk arising

              Sometimes fewer words do a better job, not that this is a particularly good example. I expect the sunshine will return to you all soon enough along with a firmer understanding of how climate change comes home.

            • Fay Slimm.

              Ah - - Dusk you have scored yet again with this engaging confession of romantic memories which ever remain - - a special sigh too for your final stanza which oozes with pure poetic imagery.

            • Neville


              .. No matter which way one looks at it .. When put like that, your readers face is rearranged into a smile .... smashing DA ..



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