fantastic things | draft 2

GON

i have seen the most fantastic things

come and go like wild dreams

but even stars as bright as they seem

fade away by morning light

 

and i have read those fairy tails

followed footsteps of those mighty trails

walked miles in shoes i could not fill

but miles i walked them still

 

i have looked down into my soul

and seen darkness like a black hole

but even though thunderclouds roll

i will still stand up and fight

  • Author: noah (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 22nd, 2021 14:28
  • Comment from author about the poem: edit: added 2nd stanza 5/7/22
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments5

  • Jerry Reynolds

    Optimistic write, GON

    • GON

      thank you jerry x

    • FredPeyer

      Go for it Noah, all it takes is that first step. Well written!

      • GON

        thanks fred x

      • Goldfinch60

        Through that black hole light shines in your words.

        Andy

        • GON

          always appreciated andy x

        • Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose)

          Lovely expression and nice flow to this one 🙂

          • GON

            thanks x

          • L. B. Mek

            wonderful read, with a resoundingly impowering message..
            thanks for sharing dear poet

            • GON

              thank you x



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