The day was over,
Into bed I slid
And just lay there,
Thinking,
Thinking about my day.
A feeling of peace came over me
As I lay there gently breathing,
Awaiting sleep to come.
As I drifted into my dreams
I realised,
That today
Had been a good day.
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Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: These thought cam over me when I went to bed last night.
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Good write Gold.
Ain't no good day in 1066, when I turned up. It would have been good, if I had not arrived! lol
Thanks Orchi.
That it would Orchi, that it would.
Andy
I caught the No.7 bus to Hastings that day. Or did I ride me horse there?! Hi ho, Silver. Was I the Lone Ranger's brother?
Yes - they do happen. those days are what make life special.
A polished little gem of a day and a poem of similar quality, Andy.
Thank you Dave, yes they do happen and hopefully there will be many more to come.
Andy
lol, its a rare trait to be so in touch with one's youthful innocence, after the winds of time have had a good go at dimming all that naïve hope from our horizons.. thank you!
for reminding us, that yes life was truly that simple: once
Are these words for this Poem Mek or for another one?
Andy
🙂 Didn't think you worried that much, Andy
I wouldn't want another poet to miss words written for them Dave, it may make there day.
Andy
Good point, Andy - it might....perhaps; who knows....?
Lovely. X
Thank you Olivia.
Andy
A fine write, Andy.
Thank you Jerry.
Andy
Love it Andy! At my age, every day I wake up and realize I am still here, is a good day!
Same with me Fred, same with me.
Andy
If you can climb the stairs to bed, then its been a good day, you survived. If you can descend the stairs without injury the following morning, its been a good night.
So true d a, so today will be a good day, I managed to get down the stairs, out some music on and got the PC to work.
Andy
Wonderful reflection, only until I put today's perspective to sleep so too can I fall into a blissful one.. 🌹
Very true Alita.
Andy
You lucky old fella .. that makes .. now let's see .................................................................................................................................quite a few in a row , between you n me ....................... N
It's only a number Neville and there will be many more good days ahead of us both.
Andy
It feels so good when we know before sleep that the day has been kind to us Andy - I love your fine outlook on life my friend.
Thank you Fay life is good.
Andy
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