Both are part of the whole, rational or irrational

Poetic Dan

It is hard to be rational at irrational times 


To allow this freedom to laugh or cry 


As the logical can hold a breath to tight 


When the illogical can hand a key of light 


Emotions get entangled from the story within 


To separate the two is when living truly begins 

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 24th, 2021 09:21
  • Comment from author about the poem: So much work at the moment that my own triggers are firing off! It never easy to run your own business your way but we all have trauma to heal or share the journey to keep us grounded to what we feel. I thank my friends and mostly apologetically my outstanding wife, for helping my dark side turn in to light. We each must do as we feel to find the calmness of balancing the love within
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  • Users favorite of this poem: AlitaOpal, L. B. Mek.


  • orchidee

    Good write Dan.

    • Poetic Dan

      Always appreciated my friend

    • Neville

      this has got to be one of your very best to date ... not only a brill little poem but one that contains a whole lot of insight and truth ..... write on brother Dan .........................Neville

      • Poetic Dan

        If not for my muse these words could not be found. For the opening lines was her words to me after a dark episode!

        Always appreciate your time my friend

      • Jerry Reynolds

        Hopeful write, Dan.

        • Poetic Dan

          Thank you kindly, it did the job for me!

        • Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose)

          Short but interesting writing . I liked it .

          • Poetic Dan

            Thank you an bs the word all came because of a screaming child!

            Appreciate your time

          • AlitaOpal

            Well put and ditto.. I too have gone through a dark tunnel with mine only to realise the situation only brings us closer.. Love to you and your wife ❤️

            • Poetic Dan

              Bless when we can see all the beauty in dark and light

              Always appreciate your time

            • Goldfinch60

              Your life has really begun now Dan and it will be so very good from now on.


              • Poetic Dan

                No joke there buddy, it really is!

                Always appreciated

              • L. B. Mek

                its hard to not take for granted those loyal few who stand at our side, shows the measure of the person to recognise and express gratitude, even if overdue
                that's the secret to communication we all misunderstand, true love needs little watering to blossom, but its only when we're in-synch we can recognise those telltale signs for us to provide those rainfall words of solace: our parched partner's rely upon...

                • Poetic Dan

                  Your reflection is always dazzling
                  Such a gift to know your vibration
                  May your journey be like a vacation
                  From one soul to another
                  You make mine more worth it!

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