Salty River

SunSearcher

The salty river flows

Glistening by the headlights glow

Haunted by memories of the past

Replaying on the radio

 

Wonder how it could have been

If time would’ve been a friend

Maybe our love would’ve last

Too late to try again

 

Because the bridge fell apart

The minute you broke my heart

Irreparable damage

Causing a lifetime of baggage

 

~ SS

1/9/21

  • Author: SunSearcher (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 25th, 2021 21:28
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • dusk arising

    Carry your baggage well lest it become a burden.

    • SunSearcher

      Or just dump it!! 🤣

      Thanks for reading!

    • Goldfinch60

      That baggage must be released as you move forward into better life.

      Andy

      • SunSearcher

        Yes!! Just throw it out the window and keep rolling!

        Thanks for reading!

      • FredPeyer

        Well written, SS. Somebody (can't remember who) once said something like: If a man steps into a river the second time the river is not the same and neither is the man. Same with relationships. We can try again but most likely it will not be the same.

        • SunSearcher

          Thank you so much! Very true. Nice saying...I like that comparison

        • Caring dove

          Nicely expressed 🙂

          • SunSearcher

            Thank you so much!

          • A.H. Browning

            You have a wonderful way with words.

            • SunSearcher

              Aaww thank you so very much A.H.
              That means a great deal to hear!



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