Good intentions can not act
This is for the mind to go ratta tat tat
Trapped in a cage unless we enact
The power of the body to authenticity flow
With a language that is know only to the soul
Something that's connects all being to the water hole
Trust
Respect
Loyalty
Learning to move on and let go
Listening to the beat of the heart that drives it all.
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Author:
Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I'll be honest and say the words "was and is" actually replaced the word mother... family can be whatever we make it mean, thanks to all those that feel like that to me..
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Comments6
Nicely expressed . I especially love the last line 🙂
Thank you so much and hope you have a wonderful day!
Appreciate your time
Your welcome 🙂 could you maybe take a look at my latest poem ?
and that last line says it all..
well chosen words my friend
Yes your beat is strong I can feel it always through your words my friend.
Thank you again for reading and feeling mine
Good write Dan.
Tip of that hat good sir!
Good write, Dan.
Expressed emotions always feels good as does your comment and time!
Wonderful words Dan. Trust, respect and loyalty should be so inherent within us all.
Andy
Nature still and will always rule the day!
Much wisdom in ya words today Dan.
Yeah they don't stay long my friend
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