In times of distress there be an act of behaviour
Unable to communicate looking for some kind of savior
The only thing needed is a safe place to find us
Then we can recognise our lifes beautiful reminders
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Author:
Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Another full week of living the dream! Forever grateful to all that inspire and put their trust in me
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Good write Dan.
Can't believe I forgot to come back.
Thank for always reading my work good sir
You said it well Dan. Now let's look for that place!!!
Always gone with the blink of an eye but I know it comes back as quickly as it went...
Always appreciate you visit
That good life is there for us all and you have certainly found it now.
Andy
It's just like a lucky penny. Many can be found and lost!
I find it profound that you're spreading the teachings of patience in your picture and its relation to the meaningful concept of self-discovery in your words, symbiotic in its distillation of realised, self worth..
a great share my friend,
as always so happy to read of your continued success in achieving and Maintaining, life's fruits of self-planted, fulfilment
Ha, it feels like I'm really a Bible just for me each time you see what you see many this continue in us both to be way more that we dream we can be... live the life you love
“ safe place to find us “ so true . We all need to feel a sense of safety within and in our lives .
Lovely last line btw
Thank you so much this was a very reflective piece. As it was written for a friend to find hers but also recognise my own journey to find that place
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