Here I am trapped,
Trapped in a hard shell.
I fight and struggle and burst free,
The darkness is still around me,
But I start to climb upwards.
Suddenly I burst through
Into the light,
That light gives me strength,
Strength to climb upwards
Spreading leaves below me.
I turn into a bud which grows
Until that time when I burst forth
And become a beautiful flower,
Showing love to all around me.
My flower slowly withers
But I have produced new life
Which I send into the ground,
Knowing that in time
My dying will produce more like me.
So my death will always produce life,
Much more life than me,
Just a single flower.
- Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: March 17th, 2021 02:18
- Category: Reflection
- Views: 75
Comments8
Good write Gold.
It's very spiritual too: 'Unless a grain of wheat falls into the ground and dies, it abides alone: but if it die, it brings forth much fruit' (John 12 v.24).
Thanks Orchi. True words.
Andy
Very good write Andy - I hope that the seeds I have just sown burst forth into beautiful flowers - but it's a bit too cold at the moment for quick germination!
I am sure those seeds will bring you beauty in your life Classicmister.
Andy
Wonderful voices to add to your positive words on climbing into the light - - a fine read dear Andy
Thank you for your very kind words Fay, much appreciated.
Andy
Beautiful Andy, simply beautiful!
Bravo, and hope all is well!
Thank you Ben, much appreciated.
Yes all is well and I hope all is well with you also.
Andy
Beautiful ..Very good write!
Thank you Mottakeenur, most grateful.
Andy
Love it good true and deep very good 🙂
Thank you Joseph, much appreciated.
Andy
much deeper in meaning than a first readthrough would reveal..
a layered write Andy, indeed
however miniscule - in scale, we may represent against the endless magnitude of existence: we all, make a meaningful impact in our own subtle way
(admittedly not always positive, but impactful all the same)
Thank you Mek, glad you went deeper into it.
Andy
I will use this as a caption to my single flower post, if you will allow...
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