Olivia.

Change, a haiku

The time has now come

        Excited for a new start

                 What will be will be

Comments2

  • Goldfinch60

    That new start will be filled with wonder.

    Andy

    • Olivia.

      Thanks xxxx

    • L. B. Mek

      'Que sera, sera': indeed..
      I like your modern twist on the haiku tradition,
      especially the steps of progress in line placement, matching
      the realised acceptance of your wording, progressive:
      in every way

      • Olivia.

        I really love your comments they really are very thoughtful thank you it means so much. I am very new to “poetry” it’s more me just writing words that pop into my mind. But the haiku really intrigued me. You actually have to think so this is my first ever one! I’m very pleased x



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