Change, a haiku

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  Goldfinch60 March 19th, 2021 01:42

  That new start will be filled with wonder.
  
  Andy

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    Olivia.March 19th, 2021 08:13

    Thanks xxxx

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  L. B. Mek March 19th, 2021 05:32

  'Que sera, sera': indeed..
  I like your modern twist on the haiku tradition,
  especially the steps of progress in line placement, matching
  the realised acceptance of your wording, progressive:
  in every way

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    Olivia.March 19th, 2021 08:15

    I really love your comments they really are very thoughtful thank you it means so much. I am very new to “poetry” it’s more me just writing words that pop into my mind. But the haiku really intrigued me. You actually have to think so this is my first ever one! I’m very pleased x