Notice of absence from L. B. Mek
'fare ye well' kind friends
'fare ye well' kind friends
a natural result of repetition
is inevitable manipulation
resulting in eventual distortion
of its purpose, at origination
whether this results in its evolution
or devaluation
is all up to your perception
© L. B. Mek
May 2018
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Oh my, L.B. I like that. I worked for an an art director once, who talked like that.
nice, I especially feel a sense of accomplishment if you approve my shorter length scribbles, like a tentative student gaining a passing grade from a grandmaster they admire: I'm humbled, thank you Jerry!
"Repetition" can be a useful poetic tool or it can ruin a poem. Here the partial repetition if your line endings adds to the poems value, It demonstrates for the reader exactly what the poem is trying to convey. Interesting read. - Phil A.
perfectly summarised! I'm so grateful when insightful poet's like yourself interpret my feeble efforts with such clarity, it's a wonderful source of motivation for me
thank you, for taking the time to read, analyse and critique with a supportive mindset, dear poet
So true Mek but if you can perceive it correctly all will be as it should.
Andy
ain't that just the infuriating element at the core - of it all, my friend
only at our precipice do we glean those truths
that validate our lives worth and 'perceive'
meaningful value in each gifted breath
so often: far too late..
thanks for the insightful comment Andy
Could you repeat that?
perfectly tuned wit: exemplified with accessibility's ease, lol
thanks for the unexpected chuckle
Wow.... boom.. love it! And love it again my friend. That's a beautiful view, don't forget it or maybe let it help you find the place to rest and sleep..
yup, angled with the right intent - a landscape view does help put everything in its context and help ease away those restless nights,
appreciate your wise words of reassuring support my friend, thanks for investing you time in my humble scribbles
Awesome!! You've summed up my daily routine!😁
well, that's just: Awesome! lol
thank you, glad you enjoyed the read dear poet
is inherently so, as truth should not need to be repeated
nicely done
well, maybe but who knows my friend, if inherent was innate then certainly
but when our instincts differ so divisively
who can blame anyone for trying to narrate 'their' fragment of truth, so intently..
thanks for the engaging comment dear poet
and i agree 100%
awesome!
thanks for taking the time to read and comment dear poet
truly appreciated
you`re welcome
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