Better to of loved just pick those pieces up

Poetic Dan

Love

My first was incredible

I'll truly never forget

Each one until this step

As two souls interconnect 

Never give up on lifes test

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 4th, 2021 01:51
  • Comment from author about the poem: Pop on yesterday read to posts and got inspired as always... keep up the write, no one but you know what's right, for you!
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  • Fay Slimm.

    A piece filled with gems dear Dan - souls interconnecting brings bountiful blessings.

    • Poetic Dan

      Always good when you find one word to rap it all up... thank you for the comment always a pleasure

    • SureshG

      So memorable, so well said

      • Poetic Dan

        Yes each could have pages of it own but instead I'll keep my crown high as I wish each of them would...

        Thanks for your time
        Always appreciated

      • orchidee

        Good write Dan.

      • Goldfinch60

        Two souls as one is real love Dan.

        Andy

        • Poetic Dan

          Still not sure I know what that is but I like this one my friend!

        • L. B. Mek

          'Pop on yesterday to read posts and got inspired as always...'
          that's the wonder of this wonderful MPS community you've all helped cultivate,
          it's such a rare gift of inclusivity
          in these challenging times of weaponised - diversity
          by separatist mindsets to unity, within humanity!..
          a wonderful read as always, dear poet

          • Poetic Dan

            As so is your wonderful reply and most importantly time!



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