Kevin Michael Bloor

The Horse's Head

One day I woke up in my bed;
was shocked to find a horse's head.
It lay upon my pillow, still.
All I could think was, who could kill
a horse, so fine, with flowing mane;
this killer had to be insane!

Comments2

  • Goldfinch60

    Dreaming of 'The Godfather' then Kevin?

    Andy

  • L. B. Mek

    well, not really that bad although certainly strange, lol
    but depending on how light or metaphorically - deep, you want to keep it, there is room to excavate and burrow out a unique write I feel, may take a few edits and drafts I admit

    • Kevin Michael Bloor

      Thanks LB. You are too kind. I only posted it for fun. One of those crazy days. lol.



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