There is an island in the sea
Just like heaven, for you and me,
I know you’re there and looking out,
I will be with you, there’s no doubt.
Our time together in our home
Needed for us nowhere to roam,
We were together, in heart and soul,
Close with each other, made us whole.
You left me, taking heaven’s call
And were lost in body, to us all,
But I know the place where you are,
And look down on me, from your star.
When my time is called I’ll be there
By your side giving all my care
Our love for each other growing
So very fast, never slowing
So wait my love, I’ll be with you
To take you in my arms anew
And to that island we will fly
Ever together you and I.
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Author:
Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: April 10th, 2021 01:09
- Comment from author about the poem: For Joyce looking down on me from her star.
- Category: Love
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You know what I'm going to put here , even before...
Yep - thanks for the rhythm and rhyme.
And after reading I can have no doubt you will be whole on your star, never slowing, you both.
The magic of poetry, Andy
Thank you for your very kind words Dave, they are very much appreciated.
As you know I don't write many rhyming or scanning poems but I thought I would do this one for a change.
Andy
Come on Andy - I don\'t want to look like a bully or a coach, that would be totally inappropriate; but please give it a go more often, they slide through much easier.... 🙂
A sensitive write Gold.
Thank you Orchi.
Rare to see you producing rhyme like this. It's as if you were doodling whilst in a dream of your destiny.
I may have been in that dream or Calliope may have had something to do with it.
Andy
sounds like paradise andy
It will be ron. Thank you.
Andy
you`re welcome
Very impressive Andy. And yes, you will be with her again.
Thank you for your kind words AP, much appreciated.
Andy
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