Broken # 2 Maybe
I know its late
And
I am old
Maybe too old
Not
To mention
Broken …
But I will
Surely
Try to be
Both
Beautiful and
Altogether
Perfect for thee
Yes …
Seamlessly
Mended my love
And so
Remember this
When I return
Just you
Mark my words …
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Author:
Neville (
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Good write Neville.
......................................................................... Ta my friend n truly
......... Neville 🙂
You beaten them eggs? You can't beat a........ whatever!
Rich with intent a love like this will surely win fair Lady dear Nev. - - another write leaving me stifling sighs...............x
... how kind you are and true my dear lady Fay ........... and I thank thee for it truly tooly too x
That love will be fixed and all will be wonderful.
Andy
.............................. thanking you is always so bloomin easy GF60 so am gonna do it again sir ..
Thank You Andy ..
... Neville
another wonderfully intimate write, my friend..
I really like how you subtly imbued the uncertainty, masked
by that bravado of stubbornly declared intent
its like the person knows - just how bleak
the reality of retracing love's broken tethers may be, but still
they know that voicing their promise, will fuel
a little bit more into those tapped-out tanks
in the wilderness of a lonely night..
Thank you so very bloomin much my friend L.B ... You get the job, first prize a coconut & a goldfish 🙂
Thanks Neville- worthwhile..enjoyed muchly.
You know I could’ve..(oh no you couldn’t); would’ve..(didn’t have the courage though, did you?); should’ve .. Oh yes – and If I had managed to write and deliver something even close, things might have been very different…….
Dave
.......................................................... quite possibly, highly likely, maybe ...
Neville
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