Andy Hunter


My head’s screwed up – can’t think can’t see
Don’t understand what’s happening to me
No heat, no light, no touch, no sound
Emptiness is all I’ve found

Inside I feel just doubts and pain
No energy to make things change
My hope is gone, my soul is lost
I don’t belong – can’t count the cost

I kissed goodbye to yesterday
Felt like a fool to walk away
Now just sitting in my home made cell
With nobody to share my hell

So I hide the truth behind a mask
Time stands still- think of what’s past
With nothing to share and no more to lose
Nothing to give and nothing to prove


  • Doggerel Dave

    Pretty bad - yes?
    But if you can write about it in such a coherent form, then you have cracked it or are well on the way.
    Liked it very much for its truth.

  • Goldfinch60

    Your words put onto paper will always help you ease the way forward to a better life.


  • L. B. Mek

    Doggerel Dave: said it best!
    thanks for sharing, dear poet

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