Goldfinch60

Light Ghost.



The time for my bed had come

So up the stairs I went,

The day had been a good one

My time had been well spent.

 

As I closed the curtains

I looked out to the night,

And what I saw below me

Gave me such a fright.

 

There  walking up my street

Was a face covered in light,

No body seemed to be there

Just this face in the night.

 

I looked with wary eyes

Scared and shaking to the bone,

Then I saw what happened,

A man was looking at his ‘phone.

Comments8

  • orchidee

    Oh lol, good write Gold.

  • Doggerel Dave

    πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ Andy......!

    • Goldfinch60

      πŸ‘

      • Doggerel Dave

        On review, just in case there's any ambiguity, Andy - this one really did it for me. Those walking the streets heads bent into their machines really bug me, That, since I don't go out much at night is all I really know. The idea of same activity at night made me see them as all ghosts anyway....They are not in the here and now, that is for sure.

      • 1 more comment

      • Teddy.15

        LOL oh you do make me chuckle, i hope he didnt trip over.

        • Goldfinch60

          If he did it would have been his own fault.

          Thank you Teddy.

          Andy

        • The Uneducated O.A.P

          You've given me a smile to start the day withπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚, thanks.
          Bill

          • Goldfinch60

            If I have given you a smile Bill my work is done.

            Andy

          • Accidental Poet

            Interesting how tired eyes seem to see odd things. Love the song A Summer's Place. Great write Andy.

            • Goldfinch60

              Thank you AP, much appreciated.

              Andy

            • Fay Slimm.

              Nods of agreement at reading your piece of exposure dear Andy - those with phones to their ears give me a right scare in daylight not to mention their appearance in darkness.

              • Goldfinch60

                Thank you Fay, they just do not care and miss so much that is happening around them.

                Andy

              • L. B. Mek

                yup, witty commentary is a timeless recipe my friend
                thanks for the fun read

                • Goldfinch60

                  Thank you Mek.

                  Andy

                • Candlewitch

                  I just love surprise endings...thanks for the chuckle!

                  *hugs, Cat

                  • Goldfinch60

                    If I made you chuckle then I am very happy about that.

                    Andy



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