Goldfinch60

Life FIB.



Life

Has

Now come,

A new day

Is set before me,

Another day of enjoyment

In this wonderful life that has brought me to this place

Within my long life on this world,

Where wonder has shown

Where I am

Now placed

In

Life.

 

Comments7

  • Doggerel Dave

    This put me in my place......... Thanks Andy......

    • Goldfinch60

      My pleasure Dave.

      Andy

    • orchidee

      A
      Good
      Write
      Gold.
      My FIB attempt - a poor show from me! lol.

      • Goldfinch60

        LOL indeed Orchi.

        • orchidee

          I ain't even got the right number of syllables in each line. Doh!

        • Teddy.15

          Rudolph the red nose rainderer had a very shiny nose, lol thats funny funny funny, i am always up to these tricks in my local town, they always say "
          i no spika di inglish" very much enjoy the spirit of good old british humour. thank you.

          • Goldfinch60

            Thank you Teddy.

            Andy

          • Accidental Poet

            And a fine place it is to be. Well done Andy. ; )

            • Goldfinch60

              It certainly is AP.

              Andy

            • Candlewitch

              very nice!

              *hugs, Cat

              • Goldfinch60

                Thank you Cat.

                Andy

              • Jerry Reynolds

                Nicely done, Andy. Went well with my morning coffee.

                • Goldfinch60

                  Glad it went well with coffee Jerry.

                  Andy

                • Andrew Charles Forrest

                  That's a Diamond o a poem Andy

                  Thanks

                  • Goldfinch60

                    My sparkling pleasure Andrew.

                    Andy



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