Goldfinch60

That Journey.



We travel through our lives,

Each step we take shows us more,

Shows us more that we achieve,

Achieve in our lives.

When we look back we can see,

Can see that,

Can see that the journey,

The journey we have taken

Is important,

Just as important

As the destination.

Comments6

  • orchidee

    Good write Gold.
    A pity folk take steps backwards when they hear my singing. It has that effect on them. They stand back 50 yards! lol.
    One church had a 'dance' - two steps forward, one step back. I didn't know if I was coming or going!

    • Goldfinch60

      Thanks Orchi.
      The dance |I did in church was one step forward and two steps back.

      Andy

    • Teddy.15

      Absolutely. Lovely write

      • Goldfinch60

        Thank you Teddy, much appreciated.

        Andy

      • Doggerel Dave

        Much more important than the destination is the journey - once I've arrived I've got nothing to strive for..... but I have to tell you, at this point I don't mind so very much - happy to enjoy the little things and not strive so hard.
        We are both in very close to the same position, I think. Thanks for the reminder, Andy.

        • Goldfinch60

          Very true Dave, we are getting there and all is wonderful.

          Andy

        • Accidental Poet

          The destination is the reward for the journey. Great write Andy. ; )

          • Goldfinch60

            Thank you AP, most kind.

            Andy

          • Jerry Reynolds

            Good poem, Andy. Love the journey.

            • Goldfinch60

              Thank you Jerry, yes that journey has been so good.

              Andy

            • L. B. Mek

              can't word any comment more sincere than doggerel dave has already above,
              but I'll still thank you for reminding us this nugget of timeless truth, my wise friend



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