I trace my name across your lips,
You sip it off of my fingers;
We linger longer than was meant,
Venting release into the breeze
As it squeezes through our window.
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Author:
All In (
Offline) - Published: May 4th, 2021 14:09
- Comment from author about the poem: Short something I came up with today.
- Category: Love
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Comments3
May you and that love linger forever.
Welcome to MPS.
Thanks Goldfinch 🙂
Good write All.
Thanks orchidee
a good read, utilising elements of a playful, light-hearted approach
while unflinchingly revealing passion's naturally - lingering, effects
tastefully worded..
thanks for sharing
Thanks LB, very kind of you to review 🙂
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