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All In

I trace my name across your lips,

You sip it off of my fingers;

We linger longer than was meant,

Venting release into the breeze

As it squeezes through our window. 



  • Author: All In (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 4th, 2021 14:09
  • Comment from author about the poem: Short something I came up with today.
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 25
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Comments3

  • Goldfinch60

    May you and that love linger forever.

    Welcome to MPS.

    • All In

      Thanks Goldfinch 🙂

    • orchidee

      Good write All.

      • All In

        Thanks orchidee

      • L. B. Mek

        a good read, utilising elements of a playful, light-hearted approach
        while unflinchingly revealing passion's naturally - lingering, effects
        tastefully worded..
        thanks for sharing

        • All In

          Thanks LB, very kind of you to review 🙂



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