Ice Queen

Neville

Ice Queen

 

She was iceberg blue

And colder

Than permafrost

She said

Level with me baby

What is it

You really

Want to do the most

..

Then she left

In such a hurry

With everything

She ever owed

Stuffed in a single

Supermarket trolley

It seems

The ice queen

Had been de-throned ..

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 5th, 2021 03:47
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • orchidee

    Good write N. I should meet her!

    • Neville



      ...................... I would certainly try to give this one a miss Steven .. cheers tho' your time will come 🙂
      ... Neville

      • orchidee

        Boo hoo will I ever meet her - or them?

      • Accidental Poet

        Perhaps, it was never meant to be. Well penned Neville. ; ) AP

        • Neville



          ... Some things just aren't are they ... my thank you tho' my poetic friend is most definitely intentional and well meant ..................
          ... Neville

        • Doggerel Dave

          Image, promise, and....disillusionment?... did you know already, Neville?

          • Neville



            I had an idea even before already ........ thankfully she was someone else's princess .. cheers Dave
            ... Neville

          • Jerry Reynolds

            I agree with Fay. Enjoyed the read, Nev.

            • Neville



              ......................... Cheers JR .. and why aint I surprised sir ... they say great minds think alike...
              ... Neville

            • Fay Slimm.

              A slight shiver of a compelling read Nev. - methinks that lady who left had icicled blood in her bones........... hope she never existed but in your poet's mind..........x

              • Neville


                Thanks Fay... unfortunately she did exist as the main focus of some one else's life though .. my little scribble is reasonably accurate ..

                ... Neville ..... x

              • Goldfinch60

                Some people do have ice in their veins and are never defrosted, they need to be avoided.

                Andy

                • Neville



                  You just hit the nail on its proverbial sir so ya did ........... thanks a trillion GF60 ........ Neville

                • L. B. Mek

                  so clever: its kinda crazy but that 'trolleyed' finale, is imagery
                  I find so relatable, within the context of what modernity
                  has to offer, as a remnant semblance
                  of that extinct deity, we once - proudly, classed: 'A lady...'
                  (wonderfully witty, but as-ever
                  still locked-on target, with succinct commentary
                  my friend) a great read!

                  • Neville



                    ........................................ A right big thank you L.B ... chuffed to bits I am & no kidding
                    ... Neville



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