Rain
washes off memories
cruel reality remains
Wind
blows off the intimacies
cold lips dries
Tears
glue up the broken heart
silent pain bleeding
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myself and me (
Offline) - Published: May 7th, 2021 19:40
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Hope the sun comes out for you today. ; )
Yes, it does. Thanks.
How did you do this? It's so understated, bare like a haiku, profound, and keenly insightful! I don't know why but I love it! Tears glue up the broken heart... so memorable.
Sorry, I do not have the answer for your question. I am glad you enjoy it. Thank you for your kind and lovely comment.
Three very telling stanzas mandm.
Good to see you back.
Andy
Thank you for the reading. Andy. I really admire people like you who can spend time writing everyday. I can only write when I feel to do so.
but tomorrow is a new day
Yes, always. Thank you for your reading.
you`re welcome
Wow a soulful poetic way to draw conclusions metaphorically. Rain , wind and tears depicting the feel. Kudos!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
Thank you for your visiting and commenting.
three of the very best .. and each one of em, little gems in their own write ..
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