myself and me

Rain

Rain

  washes off memories

    cruel reality remains

 

Wind

  blows off the intimacies

    cold lips dries

 

Tears

  glue up the broken heart

    silent pain bleeding

      ...

Comments6

  • Accidental Poet

    Hope the sun comes out for you today. ; )

  • jarcher54

    How did you do this? It's so understated, bare like a haiku, profound, and keenly insightful! I don't know why but I love it! Tears glue up the broken heart... so memorable.

    • myself and me

      Sorry, I do not have the answer for your question. I am glad you enjoy it. Thank you for your kind and lovely comment.

    • Goldfinch60

      Three very telling stanzas mandm.

      Good to see you back.

      Andy

      • myself and me

        Thank you for the reading. Andy. I really admire people like you who can spend time writing everyday. I can only write when I feel to do so.

      • ron parrish aka wordman

        but tomorrow is a new day

      • 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷😸

        Wow a soulful poetic way to draw conclusions metaphorically. Rain , wind and tears depicting the feel. Kudos!

        Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.

        • myself and me

          Thank you for your visiting and commenting.

        • Teddy.15

          Very powerful and with wonderful if yet sad metaphor.

          • myself and me

            Thank you for reading and leave your comment.



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