Negative in Blue
It was no big secret
She was so much more
Than
Just a negative in blue
Leaning soft against
A hard
Honey yellow marble
Pillar
Surprisingly still cool
Despite the rays
Yes
It was there
Her sun shocked hair
Fell loose
And still wet
From dancing in and out
Of waves
Later though they both
Dined
On fallen fruit
And then did nothing
Except make love
And counted sunny days ..
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Author:
Neville (
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Wow, Neville that leaves me wanting more. Nicely written.
.................... how very kind of you Jerry .. many thanks sir, and muchly appreciated ............ Neville
Your lines are as artistically, knowingly loaded brushes painting from a palet of a lovers pastel life onto a canvas of teased illusion in my mine of recollected picturescapes.
I find your poetry the most romantic. Time after time you encapsulate both a melacholy and a grandeur of loves lasting rewards.
..how extraordinarily kind of you my literary friend, what a wonderfully encouraging and heart-warming review ... thank you both kindly and true ..
.. Neville
May those sunny days be with you forever Neville.
Andy
................... now that would be something wouldn't it ... thank you for those kind words Andy ..
... All Good Things to you too sir ... Neville
A fine write Neville.
This the same lass, or a different one? And should I meet this one?! lol.
this is a different one altogether Mr. O ... and I regret to inform you that she is now well n truly married to an ex police officer and has three children .. all grown up ... we are however, still in touch every now and again ...............................
Ahh, can't meet that one then. You know plenty I could meet - if it's not too much for me?!
A brilliant example of intriguing imagery written to tease our sense again with scenes of sheer romance - - great stuff for a Monday morn........x
....................... thank you kindly and ever so truly dear lady Fay ..................... I do hope your Monday is being as kind to you .. as mine is to me
... Neville ...................................................... x
Tis being kind to m - - yes - 'tis that indeed my chivalrous friend...........x
'It was there
Her sun shocked hair
Fell loose
And still wet
From dancing in and out
Of waves'..
this is when Poetry, transcends
and demeans words like Beautiful
meaninglessly: incompetent, as praise...
(Truly a sumptuous read, my friend!)
Sensuality inked with such Immersive imagery
encapsulated in that wholesome Quality
of respectfully humane, Decency
........... thank you L.B ... I am once again struck dumb and unable to articulate adequately how much your words mean to this old scribe ..............
Definitely makes it imperative to continue to monitor blood pressure, Neville...... For me a very visual piece.
... yes ... please do continue to monitor your blood pressure DD .. but remember, it is way better to have high blood pressure than to have no blood pressure ... Oh' n much appreciated too sir ..... ... ... ... Neville
Dangerously close to the eroticism of the mind -
... Then I am more than most appropriately honoured my friend and I thank you, not only for visiting these words, but for your generous review note and bolstering my confidence as a would be scribe ...
... Neville
‘would be.....” you crossed this threshold a million miles ago, so thank you for enriching us.
Good choice of words , ) I liked how this flowed with ease . Very well expressed
Thank you so very much my lovely yellow friend .. appreciated no end ............................ 🙂
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