Sandy

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  dusk arising May 10th, 2021 09:18

  Ah those tunes the piper played when we were young. To recall is bliss, like a timely kiss from the little Miss.

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  Jerry Reynolds May 10th, 2021 09:35

  Thanks, Dusk. Yes Indeed.

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  Trenz Pruca May 10th, 2021 12:11

  Short, sweet, and on point. Loved it.

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    Jerry ReynoldsMay 10th, 2021 13:24

    Thanks, Trenz.

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  Fay Slimm. May 10th, 2021 15:33

  Love the pace of this tripping piece of romantic nostalgia - - reading it twice embeds that smart gal in my memory too now Jerry......... great stuff.

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    Jerry ReynoldsMay 11th, 2021 07:35

    Thanks, Fay. A bright thread in the tapestry of me.

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  Goldfinch60 May 11th, 2021 00:16

  We have such wonderful memories Jerry.
  
  Andy

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    Jerry ReynoldsMay 11th, 2021 07:36

    Thanks, Andy. Yes, we do.

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  L. B. Mek May 11th, 2021 04:13

  acute characterisation detailing, in your succinct writing
  helps define a crisp image, for us to relate with
  although, whether that matches your 'California gal'
  is somewhat unlikely..
  a fun shorty, thanks for sharing Jerry

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    Jerry ReynoldsMay 11th, 2021 07:46

    Nonfiction. She was real the runner was a Polynesian girl that taught us to run flatfooted in the sand. It works.

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  Neville May 11th, 2021 08:54

  
  This is quite brilliant squire ... just my cuppa tea but sshhh' dont let Orchidee get wind of it ... he might want a bit himself ............
  
  Neville
  

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    Jerry ReynoldsMay 11th, 2021 09:20

    Thanks, Neville. Orchidee can get his own girlfriend, should be a number of church ladies that would like a hymn writer.