Journey of Tears
The journey of tears
From
Her eyes to the floor
Was
Quite simply fraught
With
Sublime deviations
And
Convoluted detours
In the end though
He just could not take
Anymore
There were far too
Many
Tantrums and
Lies told by the score ..
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Neville (
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The falling of self-pity's tears for whatever devious reason could not be expressed better my friend - - what cannot be changed is best left methinks- -- another great read............. x
.......................................... I am so glad you got this one Fay ................................ thanks n truly .. x
... Neville
'Sublime deviations
And
Convoluted detours
In the end though
He just could not take
Anymore
Lies told by the score ..'..
this: my gifted and oh-so insightful, friend
would be a fittingly worded, dedication
for Miss Nina Simone's: incandescent Existence
immortalised, in those timeless lyrics to
'Don't le me be, Misunderstood', specifically
'Baby, do you understand me now?
Sometimes, I feel a little mad
Well, don't you know that
No one alive can always be an angel
When things go wrong, I seem to be bad
I'm just a soul who's intentions are good
Oh Lord, please, don't let me be misunderstood'
(I'm sorry for kidnapping
your own meaning to these wonderful words
by selfishly tattooing my own interpretation
all over them)
.. I have no objection whatsoever my friend .. indeed, the adding of your own sublime interpretation to this page is more of an honour than anything else ..
You also made me think long upon those now immortal words ... and I can clearly see where thou art coming from .. Cheers, L.B
.. Neville
Well penned my friend. ; )
...................... thank you kindly Accidental Poet, a visit more appreciated than you might imagine and true ...
.. Neville
Appreciation on both sides of this entry, the poet and the reader. ; )
"Hit the road Jack, Drop off the key Lee, Make a New Plan Stan" been there for sure. Good one Neville.
.......... How extremely very Jerry ... kind, mind .............. cheers sir n all that jazz 🙂
Ah, the shroud of female tears covers many a deviation from the actual. However, now is politically not the time to be in any way demeaning toward the female whilst she wills her whiles into the compassion of the onlooker.
............... Between you and me DA .. that's precisely why it mustn't go any further ..
............... Cheers mate n truly..
............... Neville
Good write N.
What words could possibly have preceded 'It'll all end is in tears'?
Answer: Simples - 'I'm gonna sing!' lol.
I sure fell for that Mr. O .. or rather threw myself off the edge and into free fall ......... see you on the way up for air ................................................. N 🙂
Just a gendered means of self expression - think no more of it than that. Didn't punch a hole in the wall too, did she?
Succinctly penned forgive and forget.....it WAS forgive and forget, wasn't it Neville? 🙂
She did burn my favourite pair of Levi's, my green velvet jacket and my Grandma's old rocking chair .. if you ever get time .. (and are maybe bored) go check out 'Battle Green it Was' and 'Dear Number Eight' ...................... cheers
Neville
Did run through approx half your back catalogue before I had to do the washing up and continue a pack as i'm away tomorrow for five days....Not a productive search, although I did encounter 'Three Guys Walked into A Bear'. (dates would be helpful) " 'nuff said."
In love trust must always be at the heart of it and lies and deviations do not produce trust and if that trust is not there love just fails.
Andy
............ simple as that sir .......... a lesson learnt late in the day though and for so many .. thankfully in my case though, there were no rings involved .. apart from when she locked herself out ........ 🙂
Words so poetical, yet felt so dearly
... You are so spoiling this old fella my friend .. but I do like it and am ever so grateful to you too ..
... Neville
Oh my some people magically work tears to manipulate
Others, and others though heartfelt turn into works of art
Ultimately fake tears or not, lose their meaning If
lies and tantrums are infused!
Always deeply meaningful words infused in your works
... but you still got it in one ... which is brilliant ... maybe we can hook up next year ... maybe .. positively ......................... Neville 🙂
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