I've really enjoyed our evening
Think we drank too much wine
I would love to share our secrets,
If we only had more time”.
He asks, “must this be goodnight
Are you happy on your own?
Why go our separate ways tonight
We've spent too much time alone”
I feel the same, there's fire in his eyes
I need his flame, I guess he realised
So, to spark our new union
And ignite our inner fires
We decide to share our dreams
And explore our deep desires
Now my eyes are open
And I can finally see
He’s released my emotion
And cast a spell on me
Both fired with excitement
We extinguish our fears
But flames of desire will not disappear
Many years later
And I am still spellbound
He is my one true love
Whose turned my life around
We have created new memories.
Both shared our hopes and dreams
True happiness is simply contentment
The joy of life it seems
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Author:
Andy Hunter (
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- Comment from author about the poem: After my poem The Blind Date I received a request to write from the mans' point of view, therefore I have decided to write the outcome from the mans' point of view. Hope this is not too corny. lol
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Comments2
Not corny at all Andy - At least I'm now reassured that the man she was waiting for was worth the effort.
Amazed you took so little time - you knew him very well, didn't you? Neat succinct wording.
When you mentioned you would like to see Blind Date from a male POV, I thought it would be worth a try. I really appreciate your feedback 😃. It spurred me on. Thanks 👍
That happiness can be found and once there will last forever Andy.
Andy
Ver true Andy
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