That blurring twisted pain that follow can break a person in two blowing you down so rapidly
you hit the ground
Bang
Your head splits open
dragging you down to a place that you don't like to entertain in your mind because you know once you're there
It's hard to be pulled back up.
Gravity crushes you so forcefully, your bones crack one at a time
Slowly displacing your body into a jelly like figure, where you can't even prop up your head
And it's like your dancing with your spirit as you desperately try to lift your broken bones
Piecing them one by one
urgently hoping that you can glue yourself back together
and run away from the dancing spirit that tap dances in your mind
Getting louder and louder
until you can't breathe
And you collapse, getting sucked up by the dirty swamp which desperately wants to enslave you in its grounds
you push and you squirm
And you fight back
but you know that
It's only when the swamp unclenches its mouth and spits you out
That you can stand back on the ground with your bones intact
Back on track.
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Author:
hvm99 (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Everyone's been rejected by someone or something in their life, and the toll it can take on an individual can be consuming until the mind and body recover.
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Comments4
You described the intense feeling very well. Well done. Welcome to the site.
Experience of life can always put us back together.
Welcome to MPS.
such a vivid, read
thanks for sharing
Thanks 🙂
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