Studying our history to me is the only way to change this damaged world that's left
Learn from our mistakes and make this place heavenly for everybody.
deeper than theology than the majorities ideology i dont dislike faith or piety infact its opposite i wish i had belief in me. something bigger to turn to when this road of life gets steeper...
deeper than the borders and boundaries that keep us blind to the fact that we're all humanity.
not too look racially labels to me just breed a state of savagery that is increasingly becoming normality teaches the youth nothing but to speak think and act hatefully
Make them feel they have to arm up for their own safety.
This world ever tainted with our atrocities
The disgrace that makes the human story such a tragedy.
Instead of the divine comedy it should have been.
- Author: brothervilheim ( Offline)
- Published: May 20th, 2021 05:06
- Category: Unclassified
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Comments2
That's a rap sir
I've just read it as so.
Not an eminem rap
No bad words there
But for sure I heard some background music playing through the lines
Well worded to rhyme and make sense
I haven't ever thought of my poems like that.
Plus someone would have to be confident to "Rap" it on music and that isn't me haha
Thank you for reading means a lot
Maybe it's me then haha
If your confident enough to put it over some music and make it a rap then by all means I wouldnt mind haha but me I really couldn't
I wrote a bit of a fast rap type years ago if I can find it I'll post it
I don't rap either 😂
Maybe one day that divine comedy of love and peace will be with us, I would sincerely like to think so.
Andy
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