Face-ination
Did you
by chance notice
the low
cloud formation …
Just above
those high brows
and below
her widows peak …
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Author:
Neville (
Offline) - Published: May 25th, 2021 02:11
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Face-ination
Did you
by chance notice
the low
cloud formation …
Just above
those high brows
and below
her widows peak …
Offline)
Comments6
Clouds - bringer of nourishing, rebirthing rain, as are the tears we all shed.
how bloomin kind my friend ..
I might add
your comment is a poem in its own write ......................
Neville
Love the coined word in the title Nev. and oh that clever and very telling metaphor - -- - I maybe completely up a gum-tree but judgemental pride comes to mind after reading a second time your bit of intrigue today mon ami.
.......... there are no gum trees on you our Fay .. many sincere thank you's are on their way to you though
🙂
Good write N.
Should I meet her?!
............................................................................... Ta' Mr. O .. and why not indeed ::)
'how sobering
that, what endlessly inspires
is often
the very worst: within us...!'
(what a poignant write my friend
so many narratives and images
flashed through my mind
trying to decipher wat inspired you;
and ain't that the beauty
of this poetry artform, we fight
to keep alive)
............ abso bloomin lutely L.B many thanks indeed my very fine literary friend ...
... Neville
A lot said in short space. Love it, Neville.
............... Thank you kindly JR much appreciated sir
... Neville ::)
Clever words Neville that can bring profound thoughts within us.
Andy
........................ That'll do nicely my friend .. very nicely indeed
... Neville
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