2 Put it Frankly
Toulouse her
Just before the
Much
Anticipated
And
Let’s be frank
Long overdue
Synchronized
Climax
May well have
Been forgiven ..
But,
Toulouse her
Twice
Like that
Would be
Considered
Highly irregular
And since
Two wrongs
Don’t
Make a right
Tourette’s
Sure won’t
Make it right
Either
You f***ing
W***er you
Sleep tight … x
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Author:
Neville (
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- Comment from author about the poem: ... its an increasingly tick box world we live in .. innit and that's for sure
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Ahh, marked 18+, or Fido would be barking ferociously! Meanwhile, I've swooned, and he is helping to revive me. Well, he told me it was marked 18+. lol.
I saw a programme on Tourettes. One person used those words to a squirrel of all things. It looked bemused, poor creature.
Can it be helped? Or will men in white coats arrive for her soon?
............ I seem to be living in a world increasingly filled with ***** asterixis ...however, under the circumstances Mr. O I ****** thank thee ................. 🙂
Something tragic and heartfelt recounted here. One of those moments where the door of the 'best forgotten locker' has opened and due venom has been levied.
May the rest of your bank holiday weekend be spent in more restful, peaceful frame of mind dear poet.
................................. Now sorted .. ta DA
Neville
Didn't have the Monet to court her for longer? Wasn't Degas was it?
................................... Didn't Dali that's for sure .... cheers DD ..
Neville
My smiles ever widen by your cleverly inventive twisting of words Nev. - another twice read verse to set me achuckle with use of Toulouses without one Lautrec - - hopin' ya sleep tite yerself with all ya ticked boxes my naughtymost friend..............x
.................... we got another win win then Fay .. or at least it feels like it from here .............
.......................................................................................................................................................x
This was so much fun, Neville. Set your alarm or you might miss a opportunity at the "Crack of Dawn"
........... consider it done .... thanks JR
Frankly enough.
..................................................................................... that'll do nicely .. thank you kindly
Don’t ever go from TOULON to TOULOUSE. Trust me, it’s a mood killer. I did it once, and she never forgave me.
As they all said, loved your poem tooo.
... Sounds like sound advice to me my friend thanks & thanks again ...
... Neville
Good fun write hopefully bring plenty of Monet your way.
Andy
am so glad ya found this little scribble Andy .. and thank you for sticking with me .. Toulouse ya now would be Degastating ..............
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