2 Put it Frankly  

Neville

    2 Put it Frankly

 

Toulouse her

     Just before the

Much

     Anticipated

And

      Let’s be frank

Long overdue   

     Synchronized

Climax

     May well have

Been forgiven ..

     But,

Toulouse her

     Twice

Like that

     Would be

Considered  

     Highly irregular

And since

     Two wrongs

Don’t

     Make a right

Tourette’s

     Sure won’t

Make it right

     Either

You f***ing

     W***er you

Sleep tight … x

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 29th, 2021 01:41
  • Comment from author about the poem: ... its an increasingly tick box world we live in .. innit and that's for sure
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • orchidee

    Ahh, marked 18+, or Fido would be barking ferociously! Meanwhile, I've swooned, and he is helping to revive me. Well, he told me it was marked 18+. lol.
    I saw a programme on Tourettes. One person used those words to a squirrel of all things. It looked bemused, poor creature.
    Can it be helped? Or will men in white coats arrive for her soon?

  • Neville



    ............ I seem to be living in a world increasingly filled with ***** asterixis ...however, under the circumstances Mr. O I ****** thank thee ................. 🙂

  • dusk arising

    Something tragic and heartfelt recounted here. One of those moments where the door of the 'best forgotten locker' has opened and due venom has been levied.

    May the rest of your bank holiday weekend be spent in more restful, peaceful frame of mind dear poet.

    • Neville



      ................................. Now sorted .. ta DA
      Neville

    • Doggerel Dave

      Didn't have the Monet to court her for longer? Wasn't Degas was it?

      • Neville



        ................................... Didn't Dali that's for sure .... cheers DD ..
        Neville

      • Fay Slimm.

        My smiles ever widen by your cleverly inventive twisting of words Nev. - another twice read verse to set me achuckle with use of Toulouses without one Lautrec - - hopin' ya sleep tite yerself with all ya ticked boxes my naughtymost friend..............x

        • Neville



          .................... we got another win win then Fay .. or at least it feels like it from here .............
          .......................................................................................................................................................x

        • Jerry Reynolds

          This was so much fun, Neville. Set your alarm or you might miss a opportunity at the "Crack of Dawn"

          • Neville



            ........... consider it done .... thanks JR

          • myself and me

            Frankly enough.

            • Neville



              ..................................................................................... that'll do nicely .. thank you kindly

            • SureshG

              Don’t ever go from TOULON to TOULOUSE. Trust me, it’s a mood killer. I did it once, and she never forgave me.
              As they all said, loved your poem tooo.

              • Neville



                ... Sounds like sound advice to me my friend thanks & thanks again ...
                ... Neville

              • Goldfinch60

                Good fun write hopefully bring plenty of Monet your way.

                Andy

                • Neville



                  am so glad ya found this little scribble Andy .. and thank you for sticking with me .. Toulouse ya now would be Degastating ..............



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