Riding a Curve
Knowing her
like I did
indeed once
know her ..
Yet all but
far too briefly ..
Was like
riding a curve ..
Set in stone
upon a simple
eyelash flutter
A single
sun ray spied ..
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Author:
Neville (
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May that sun ray be forever with you Neville.
Andy
.................................. heart warming .. bless ya GF60 ... 🙂
A fine write N.
How about this lass? Should I meet her? Could I meet her?!
Thank you Mr. O ... this is a tricky one ... she had her ups and downs ... and although quite beautiful, she could quickly go off on one .............
A moody lass? I might swoon if I met her. Would I?
... I have no doubt, you might .. maybe
Unforgettable short lived times. Like ehen a beautiful butterfly lands on your forhead, you open your eyes to see its beautiful colours and it shits in your eye. Unforgettable.
... funny that, with everything else going on .. and coming off, I might add, I hardly noticed .. and never once complained ... however, thanks for checking in DA ...
You've bin battered and bruised by these birds lately, ain't you, Neville?
Any chance better times ahead? 😊
Advice to the lovelorn? Surely you could pass one of them on who would not be too damaging to poor old orchi? 😊
..................................................... My message would be ... never give up, there is always a chance .. thank you sir both from me and on behalf of Mr. O .. just in case he aint presently lookin 🙂
Sometimes we're touched by an Angel's smile and it stays with us for a lifetime. Beautiful poem N. ; )
.......................................... what a lovely thought and thing to say .. thank you AP and truly ... Neville
Such a sensuous read - know what you mean by knowing and hope that stone softened in time mon ami.....x
thanking you dear lady Fay in the only way I know .................... set in satin and held fast by time ...
🙂
What a heart-warming way to choose is "satin set and held fast by time" - - thanking you more than muchly ..............x
I agree with Fay, Neville. A very sensuous poem.
............................. the lady F dont often get it wrong, does she ... thank you kindly n true my friend ...
Neville
Indeed- She does not.
One more in a series of sensuous recollections, so thoroughly enjoyed.
...................................... Thank you my friend, muchly and always ...
... Neville
'Was like
riding a curve ..
Set in stone
upon a simple
eyelash flutter'..
see now, that's that Poetry: that can never be replicated
merely copied and imitated...
simply, and as ever subtly: Brilliant!
thanks for sharing my friend
I really do appreciate your ongoing encouragement L.B .. a mere thank you hardly seems sufficient .. but I sincerely do ...
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