All's Well.

Goldfinch60



My friend,

She rang,

We spoke,

She’s low,

She’s sad,

She talks,

I listen,

She rises,

Feeling better,

We talk,

I listen,

I speak,

She smiles,

I talk,

She laughs,

We speak,

We laugh,

Lowness risen,

All’s better

Laughter cures,

Cures all.

My friend

Feels better,

All’s well.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 2nd, 2021 01:15
  • Comment from author about the poem: A friend of mine is having problems - so I listen.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 19
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  • Jayasree

    That's what friends are for 🙂

    • Goldfinch60

      Thank you Jayasree, so true.

      Andy

    • orchidee

      Good write Gold.
      Why didn't I listen in 1066?! doh!
      That's classical and unforgettable - the video, among many others surely. My singing is only forgettable!

      • Goldfinch60

        Thanks Orchi.

        You never ever listened you were too busy trying to sing - keep trying - far away from me though.

        Andy

      • Neville



        ... I do so like a happy ending 🙂

        • Goldfinch60

          So do I, thank you Neville.

          Andy

        • dusk arising

          Take her out into a social circle Goldie, let her be in the company of people enjoying life, it rubs off onto people.
          Great words from you. Youre actually doing what i wrote about the other day.

          • Goldfinch60

            Thanks d a, I would love to take her out in a social circle but she lives in Sussex, a 3 hour drive away.
            I have always listened and it always helps people.

            Andy

          • Accidental Poet

            Dr. Andy at your service. ; )

            • Goldfinch60

              I don't charge any fees.😂

              Dr. Andy

              • Accidental Poet

                I wouldn't expect any less from you Andy. ; )

              • Fay Slimm.

                A caring result to listening as a friend needs to unload - - lovely read and chosen number dear Andy

                • Goldfinch60

                  Thank you Fay, caring and listening to all is so important in my life.

                  Andy

                • Saxon Crow

                  Best listener in the world.

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Thank you SC, most kind.

                    Andy

                  • myself and me

                    You have such a gentle heart for your friend. All will be well.

                    • Goldfinch60

                      Thank you mandm, I am sure all will be well.

                      Andy

                    • SureshG

                      Most of the time that’s all it takes - a sympathetic ear, and that a true friendship that you have so poetically strewn here.

                      • Goldfinch60

                        Thank you Suresh, much appreciated.

                        Andy



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