Upon Reflection
I am but
an old mirror cracked
Can you see
Your broken self in me …
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Author:
Neville (
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Oooo i like this one, a lot. Two broken mirrors together reflect an eternity of....
You got it SC ... fragmented moments ......... thanking you most humbly and kindly tooly, truly 🙂
A perfect reflection of what we may see when we look with intent of viewing the truth Nev - - such an appealing read again............x
......................... thank you dear Fay for your ongoing encouragement and support ... always welcome and ever appreciated ........................ 🙂 x
A fine write N.
Did a lass you know look in the mirror? Would it be a lass I should meet?!
........................ Thank you Mr. O .. I will put in a good word or two for ya ... 🙂
5at cracked mirror can show so many errors in our lives, once it is fixed all will be well.
Andy
.......... What a delightful thought, bless you my friend 🙂
I see a reinvented you. Awesome write N. Short but sweet. ; )
......... that'll do just nicely ... thank you kindly AP 🙂
But I see myself from my own mirror,
Reflection tells me all I need to know:
The result is plain, could not be clearer,
I’m on my way out, but some way to go….
Thanks Neville
.... Ah' there's still some life in the old Doggerel yet sir ........ thanks mightily 🙂
and I'm so proud
at this reflection, I recognise
as a Witness
to the poetry and wisdom
you've imparted: selflessly...
a great shorty, my friend
.......................................... thank you L.B ................ seriously appreciated sir ... 🙂
Oh thats just superb Neville! The most profound words I have read this year.
Destiny = going into my favourites.
A big thank you.
... Well excuse me while I thank you sir ... am truly honoured DA my literary friend ... cheers 🙂
Pets and their owners seem to merge
into one creature, likewise husbands and wives become like one being, lovers also, over time. Each reflects the other, but you have summed it all up in 15 words, and added an additional aspect of breakage. Very powerful piece. - Phil A.
I fear I might start sounding like a stuck record .. but I would be living a lie if I failed to mention here and now that I am well n truly honoured by your comment above .. Cheers MF27 🙂
Very intense, deep on many levels, worthy of series
thank you my friend ..
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