Enticing.
From the first finger of hazy light
fresh rays from
day's entrance shatter dark chains
impeccably.
Breeze stirs black dregs to a finish
as streaks of
morning beget break of new dawn
impressively.
Unsullied azure displays an astute
need for space
by removing glimpsed bits of grey
imposingly.
Sleep flits away, giving me chance
for early
attempt to describe nature's gifts
impellingly.
Caught in night's grasp is no place
to stay when
day's enticing draws poets to write
impassionly.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
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Thanks for your take on an early morning wakening, Fay.
I shall view my early starts in a more positive light in future....
Great to have your visit and comment Dave - Good to know the read has urged ya to make a bit more of those early morning inspirations .
A fine write Fay.
I have to settle for a morning mist clearing over the local duck pond! Well, that's good sight too. lol.
Ducks are beautiful and to watch them in water is just like a ballet - a good sight certainly Orchi.
Wonderful words Fay and so very true for me, maybe one day we will Dawn’s wonderful glory.
Andy
Thank you sincerely dear Andy for your in-put to the glories of dawn for poetic expressions are ever made better when watching the sun rise or set.
Lovely poem Fay. Daybreak, like twilight, is always a moment of magic
Magic is quite the right ward S.C. - to take even a small part in observing the changes when sun rises or sets is as you say -- just Magic - - - glad you enjoyed the read.
I can picture you in my twisted mind's eye sat in the shroud of night facing east clutching pen and notepad, a slight shiver running through you as you beckon the dawn with "come on you ba___rd, Impress me"
No, not really but you don't get many comments like this to the pound do you?
Ha ha -- You certainly let your fancy feel free when my wordy dawn-message catches your deeper attention - -- maybe I do sit and clutch pen and paper but not as early as sunrise in summer my imaginative friend. Your comments are always most welcome .
.. a magnificent view superbly penned
x
Thanking thee kindly for dropping by for the read - you are always so welcome dear Nev........... x
written with the the rays of new dawn...
Grateful thanks for your visit and read my friend.
The glory of morning's Sunrise and its draw on poet's words. A wonderful presentation of first light and how it inspires. Sweet verbiage Fay.- Phil A
Dear Phil - - how lovely to know my few words on dawn here have reached your far shores........ so pleased too that you enjoyed the piece.
Fay, you've done justice to the rising of the morning Sun. Excellent. ; )
Your comment after the read is doubly welcome just to know you think my poem did justice to the glory of dawn . Thanking you most sincerely A.P.
'to describe nature's gifts
impellingly.'
and ain't that
just the perfect summation
of your Poetic legacy!
I have lost count
of how many daybreak poems
you've shared with us, Dear Fay
but I know for certain
after reading each one
I'm left hoping that your next
won't be too long: in the inking..
thank you, what a wondrous depiction
truly!
Yes I fell in love with dawn-dusk inspiration past moons ago- - you know my passion for all things natural so well - appreciated sincerely are your generous and supportive comments L.B.
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