Challenges

Fay Slimm.

 

 

Challenges.

 

Why do wind-bent trees out face each attack ?


Bark, though whip-blasted and knarled stays alive
with ironized knuckles and scars pummeled black.


Could it be wise to note how they survive ?

 

How can fragile shoots beneath soil grow claws ?


Battle of will-power perceives gale's fierce fight
aims to split limbs but storm meets greater force.


Rooted in "Self" is how saplings revive.

 

Like the set leaning stance of moorland trees

so might life's challenges be met by humanity.

 

  • Author: Fay Slimm. (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 4th, 2021 01:44
  • Comment from author about the poem: Back with a wee bit of tweaking this tribute to wind-bent trees. Hope you enjoy.
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  • Goldfinch60

    I have often wondered why the lone trees on the moors survive, the strength of nature is always amazing.

    Andy

    • Fay Slimm.

      Yes amazing my friend - some trees live for years all bent and crooked by wind--blast. Thank you Andy for yet another visit and comment.

    • orchidee

      Good write Fay.

    • dusk arising

      Yes indeed Fay for now i am taking on a bent and twisted stance myself. It will be interesting to explore what keeps us clinging to life as the daily storms batter.

      • Fay Slimm.

        Will power often my friend keeps us all out there in life's storms though a bit bendy and twisty......

      • Doggerel Dave

        Not all trees do as many folks here with inappropriately placed trees now sitting on crushed roofs will testify.
        However here’s a survivor from the underside of the world:
        https://www.artgallery.nsw.gov.au/collection/works/134.1975/
        Not quite wind bent, but a survivor anyway…
        Thanks Fay for posing the question – and I hope humanity does.

        • Fay Slimm.

          Wow - - I looked up your given reference to stubborn endurance and that tree deserves some sort of medal with all its insides eaten away................ Survivor it certainly is Dave - - is it still in existence today do you know. ?

          • Doggerel Dave

            ....Plus half the root system exposed by possibly flood water erosion sometime you'll note.... An icon here for some....I have a reproduction on my wall.
            Still survives (with perhaps some extra support) A tourist attraction I believe.
            Thanks for taking the time, Fay.

          • L. B. Mek

            'Rooted in "Self" is how saplings revive.

            Like the set leaning stance of moorland trees
            so might life's challenges be met by humanity.'
            what an empowering, philosophical metaphor
            of profound insight you've shared today, dear Fay..
            (although, admittedly
            when I read your description of 'wind-bent'
            my first thought, after checking the picture again
            was: 'that's a conservative wording, of uprooted') lol

            • Fay Slimm.

              Thank you for looking in once again L.B. and making a note of being rooted in Self for both trees and people as a way of survival. We have some good examples in nature I know you'll agree.

            • Jerry Reynolds

              Good one, Fay. Have always marveled at the age of some trees. A bristlecone pine tree in California, estimated at over 4,800 years old.

              • Fay Slimm.

                Whooooo what an age for a tree and what that living wood has experienced too. Thanks Jerry for the interesting input to a fascinating subject.

              • Neville


                I have a long fascination with the kind of trees and other fauna that you have so amazingly well described and depicted here my friend ..
                their determination to survive against all adversity and in particular, often in the least likely of places is something I am in awe of ...

                Neville ... x

                • Fay Slimm.

                  You got in one word dear Nev............... 'tis DETERMINATION and no less that leads to survival. Have a peek at Jerry's note above of a Californian tree reaching extraordinary old age and Dave' s reference for viewing a survivor with no insides.............. x

                  • Neville



                    ................ tiz both done ... & sure enough, enlightenment followed ... thanks to all involved n truly 🙂

                  • Saxon Crow

                    Brilliant! Hidden depths and hidden strength. Byt am i referring to the tree or yourself Fay?

                    • Fay Slimm.

                      Ha ha - - well that is the question with no certain answer my friend --- thanking you masses for your visit and comment on Challenges.

                    • Accidental Poet

                      The will to live sometimes is stronger than the will to give up. ; )

                    • Laura🌻

                      My dear Fay,

                      I completely agree with AC’s comment!
                      I’m so happy to have read your piece...
                      especially on this day. You never disappoint me my dear Poetess!

                      Laura 🌻



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