Tears Stream Tanka.

Goldfinch60



Tears stream from my eyes

As my heart absorbs her love

Down from her heaven.

My lover is still with me

As I look up to her star.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Online Online)
  • Published: June 6th, 2021 01:15
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 21
  • Users favorite of this poem: Accidental Poet
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  • Saxon Crow

    Beautiful. Simply beautiful

    • Goldfinch60

      Thank you SC, much appreciated.

      Andy

    • orchidee

      A poignant write Gold.
      It's said the grieving process can take 18 months to 2 years, and then we never fully forget, of course. Not that we want to forget.
      There's odd things like unexpected tears. With me, one thing was almost crawling around the floor some days, due to feeling worn out.

      • Goldfinch60

        Thanks Orchi, yes the grieving process does take time but I know I will be with her again.

        Andy

      • Neville


        I'm with the Crow .. simply beautiful GF60

        • Goldfinch60

          Thank you Neville much appreciated.

          Andy

        • dusk arising

          Life goes on along it's journey for a purpose unrevealed to us.

          • Goldfinch60

            It surely does d a, but I know I will be with her again.

            Andy

          • Jayasree

            That's a lovely poem. Short and sweet and so touching.

            • Goldfinch60

              Thank you Jayasree, much appreciated.

              Andy

            • Accidental Poet

              Let her starlight fall upon you
              As her love for you absorbs your tears
              Your heart embraced by her too
              Beautiful Andy. ; )

              • Goldfinch60

                Thank you for your lovely words AP, she is always with me.

                Andy

              • Trenz Pruca

                Always enjoyable. Thank you.

                • Goldfinch60

                  Thank you Trent.

                  Andy

                • subregi

                  Truly melting our hearts with your poem.

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Thank you subregi, most kind.

                    Andy



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