The Edge of Golden

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  Fay Slimm. June 6th, 2021 07:41

  Another few lines of spice Nev. to brighten a sunless Sunday - -smiling big now so thanks in bunches . The ways raced to pleasures of love are truly gilded with touch.

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    NevilleJune 6th, 2021 17:02

    
    
    I was gonna go for a curry until I re-read wot I writ ......................................... ya can beat an egg, but ya can't beat a gilded touch .......... x

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  dusk arising June 6th, 2021 08:10

  Said the spiderr to the fly.

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    NevilleJune 6th, 2021 16:59

    
    
    ................. quite armless .. but beware of them legs and teeth etc ................... cheers DA 🙂

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  Saxon Crow June 6th, 2021 08:41

  Ooo i say!

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    NevilleJune 6th, 2021 16:54

    
    
    ......................... 🙂

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  orchidee June 6th, 2021 09:52

  She seems a bit feisty this lass. Should I give her a miss? lol.

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    NevilleJune 6th, 2021 16:51

    
    
    .. A wide birth would be the sensible option .. but hey, who am I to dictate who, what or where ya try and lay your anchor .. Ta for checking in tho' tarrah for now Mr. O 🙂

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    orchideeJune 7th, 2021 01:46

    I might be a dark horse! heehee.

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  Trenz Pruca June 6th, 2021 13:09

  Thank you for bringing back to memory what has been long gone for me.

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    NevilleJune 6th, 2021 16:46

    
    ... thank you for taking a little time out to consider my little scribble .. much appreciated and true 🙂

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  Jerry Reynolds June 6th, 2021 14:02

  Sun's out here, Neville but this made it a bit brighter.

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    NevilleJune 6th, 2021 16:44

    
    
    ................................. Good to hear JR ... & thank you kindly sir ..

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  Goldfinch60 June 7th, 2021 00:12

  If you race too quickly you may well be too tired at the end of the race to give pleasure Neville. "Slowly, slowly, catchee monkee"
  
  Andy

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    NevilleJune 7th, 2021 01:23

    
    
    ... I seldom rush these days Andy having learnt about the little monkee a long time ago ... ta for checking in ...

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  L. B. Mek June 7th, 2021 04:40

  sadly, nowadays
  for a select majority, their passion is reserved
  for those political or social activism
  victimhood triggers..
  and so
  I suspect, they'll read these words
  that you masterfully and succinctly
  distilled into poetic brevity
  then see your age restriction, categorisation
  and reduce: this 'lived-in-truth'
  worded with a poet's gift for relatability
  as a depiction of risqué playfulness;
  and not
  pointedly, more meaningfully
  as an inked recollection
  of experienced true love being actualised
  into a physical expression
  of sensuality, sincerity and loyalty;
  where innately heightened
  tantalised, fingertip nerves of spirituality
  play those piano keys on flesh
  to produce, a melody
  of sensation's electrifying goosebumps;
  a feat, only achieved
  when the act of sex, has more meaning
  than merely
  sating biologically engraved mating cravings
  and the excreting of stimulated liquids;
  where literally: magically
  at that time and in that moment
  two people - become one, willingly and wholeheartedly
  and impassioned, oh - so, much more satisfyingly;
  a wondrously cathartic, artform
  of physical and spiritual synchronicity, that few
  get to experience this days
  where blue pills and morning-after pills
  mean, this gifted superpower
  to experience
  'edge of golden': nirvana on earth
  as blissful affirmation
  to all things, unique about our existence
  is wasted, pitifully
  as just another aspect of humanity
  we take for granted, far - too, easily...
  

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    NevilleJune 7th, 2021 05:53

    
    
    You got me ... and I just can't thank you enough my friend & truly .. Neville