value people

dusk arising

some people
bring out the best in you
you may have tried
to be lovers 
you may have once
really hurt that some one
they may have hated you
they may have loved you
they may have seen you
make a total asshole of yourself
you may have felt shamed
some people dont have
to think of others this way
some are lucky
others have learned
to really value people this way

  • Author: dusk arising (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 9th, 2021 07:23
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Comments8

  • Jerry Reynolds

    Good poem, Dusk. The shape evokes a cremation urn intentional or just me.

    • dusk arising

      Thanks Jerry. Quite unintentional but i do see the resemblence.

    • orchidee

      Good write dusk.

    • Laura🌻

      da,
      I truly believe there’s a reason/purpose for encountering the many people throughout our lives. It awakens us to our many trials and tribulations of our life’s journey.

      Thank you for sharing your thoughts.

      Laura🌻

      • dusk arising

        I dont know about reasons/purpose because that's predestiny but certainly everything which happens to us shapes us.

        Thank you Laura.... nice to see your bright yellow sunflower again.

        • Laura🌻


          I’m so glad to be back, thank you.🌻

          That bright sunflower has given me the hope that I’ll live another day. If one loses courage, there’s always hope to go on…with a smile.

          Laura🌻

        • Saxon Crow

          Nice one dusk. Always look for the ones who treat you well and you are always able to be yourself

          • dusk arising

            Hmm it would be nice to choose wouldn't it. I find that i take 'em as i find 'em and generally people are quite affable. Thank you SC.

          • SureshG

            If you value others, chances are good you will bring out the best in them.

            • dusk arising

              I hope so, I do value those I encounter. Mutual respect is my wish. Thank you MS.

            • Trenz Pruca

              Thank you, Dust. Always enjoyable.

            • Goldfinch60

              Very true d a the true friends will always bring out the best in you and are so valuable to us in our lives.

              Andy

              • dusk arising

                Understanding and respecting others freedoms goes a long way. Thanks Goldie.

              • L. B. Mek

                this is what wisdom, reveals itself to me as
                when I identify it in others or in what I read
                it exists here
                in these words you've penned, dear poet
                thank you!

                • dusk arising

                  High praise, thank you LBM.



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