Seizing Moments

Neville

Seizing Moments

 

There are moments

To seize

And there are those

To let go

How the wind it does

whisper

and perpetually blow

Today though

it screams, yet gives

nothing away ..

So your secret is safe

till the morrow, maybe ..

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 12th, 2021 03:19
  • Comment from author about the poem: .................... The title for this little scribble was originally going to be 'Until Tomorrow' ..
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 89
  • Users favorite of this poem: Accidental Poet, Laura🌻
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  • Saxon Crow

    Tomorrow never comes...

    Nicely written Nev

    • Neville



      Thanking you SC and muchly so ...

    • Accidental Poet

      Giving reason to look forward to tomorrow. Nice write N. ; )

      • Neville



        ........................................... Cheers AC and that's putting it mildly my friend ...

      • Fay Slimm.

        Am smiling again at how you build up with imagery a feel of intrigue as you poem this ode and I like the title you use above this play around Seizing Moments amigo - - great stuff.........x

        • Neville



          ............................................ Ta and truly ........... mistress Fay .... 🙂 x

        • orchidee

          Good write Neville.

          • Neville


            ............................. cheers Mr. O ... every little helps now dunnit 🙂

          • dusk arising

            When passion becomes a whispering breeze - worry!
            Whilst passiion is a screaming wind - let it blow, let it blow, let it blow.

            • Neville



              .......... well blow me ... I do believe he's got it ............ 🙂

            • Laura🌻

              Neville,

              Yes, let’s seize those moments
              that gratify us…
              in the now!
              Let’s live for today…
              for we don’t know what
              tomorrow will bring!

              Your penned “scribble”,
              as you call it,
              has been a very satisfying read.

              Thank you for sharing.

              Laura🌻

              • Neville



                Bless ya for stopping for a while and considering them Laura .. many thanks indeed .... 🙂 🌻

              • Goldfinch60

                Tomorrow is waiting for us and it will be wonderful.

                Andy

                • Neville



                  bloomin hope so .. but what a luverly thing to pin to my page regardless ... so tasteful, so crisp a comment ... your optimism reminds me of a little bag of crisps you Golden Wonder you .... 🙂

                • Jerry Reynolds

                  Good twist, Neville. A bit of clever poetic kiss and tell.

                  • Neville



                    thanks JR .. thought I better make an effort 🙂

                  • Christina8

                    Excellent piece!!!

                    • Neville



                      ..................... Thank you and hello stranger .. so good to see you back here .. Hope you are here to stay .. 🙂

                    • Doggerel Dave

                      And tomorrow "The answer is blowin' in the wind"
                      Sorry Neville - I just couldn't get it out of my mind....

                      • Neville



                        ................... Neva mind, thank you Dave .............. 🙂

                      • Fay Slimm.

                        A quick second read of this truly engaging piece highlights a different subject in my view Nev. - - secret indeed is the moment when even fierce winds cannot expose it - - so with this second comment I think a good title could have been Your Secret - - whatever - - tis still good stuff...........x

                        • Neville



                          I would welcome you back Fay any day of the week ... becuz re-visits are really kinda special, in my book 🙂 x



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