Seizing Moments
There are moments
To seize
And there are those
To let go
How the wind it does
whisper
and perpetually blow
Today though
it screams, yet gives
nothing away ..
So your secret is safe
till the morrow, maybe ..
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Author:
Neville (
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- Comment from author about the poem: .................... The title for this little scribble was originally going to be 'Until Tomorrow' ..
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- Users favorite of this poem: Accidental Poet, Laura🌻
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Tomorrow never comes...
Nicely written Nev
Thanking you SC and muchly so ...
Giving reason to look forward to tomorrow. Nice write N. ; )
........................................... Cheers AC and that's putting it mildly my friend ...
Am smiling again at how you build up with imagery a feel of intrigue as you poem this ode and I like the title you use above this play around Seizing Moments amigo - - great stuff.........x
............................................ Ta and truly ........... mistress Fay .... 🙂 x
Good write Neville.
............................. cheers Mr. O ... every little helps now dunnit 🙂
When passion becomes a whispering breeze - worry!
Whilst passiion is a screaming wind - let it blow, let it blow, let it blow.
.......... well blow me ... I do believe he's got it ............ 🙂
Neville,
Yes, let’s seize those moments
that gratify us…
in the now!
Let’s live for today…
for we don’t know what
tomorrow will bring!
Your penned “scribble”,
as you call it,
has been a very satisfying read.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
Bless ya for stopping for a while and considering them Laura .. many thanks indeed .... 🙂 🌻
Tomorrow is waiting for us and it will be wonderful.
Andy
bloomin hope so .. but what a luverly thing to pin to my page regardless ... so tasteful, so crisp a comment ... your optimism reminds me of a little bag of crisps you Golden Wonder you .... 🙂
Good twist, Neville. A bit of clever poetic kiss and tell.
thanks JR .. thought I better make an effort 🙂
Excellent piece!!!
..................... Thank you and hello stranger .. so good to see you back here .. Hope you are here to stay .. 🙂
And tomorrow "The answer is blowin' in the wind"
Sorry Neville - I just couldn't get it out of my mind....
................... Neva mind, thank you Dave .............. 🙂
A quick second read of this truly engaging piece highlights a different subject in my view Nev. - - secret indeed is the moment when even fierce winds cannot expose it - - so with this second comment I think a good title could have been Your Secret - - whatever - - tis still good stuff...........x
I would welcome you back Fay any day of the week ... becuz re-visits are really kinda special, in my book 🙂 x
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